Fall_Into_The_Sky

Awww I love a story where the person looks beyond appearance.

I like it.

I laughed at the end. It's funny such a horrific girl and she get's it all in the end. Eventhough she died she is with the man she loves for ...

Actually I love this. When does the real story come???

Great story. I like the idea of falling in love within 12 hours. It's the embodiment of love at first sight.... I truly love this story. If you keep writing ...

Thanks yea i do need to rewrite this

This story is amazing but the thought of that world makes me angry.

Thank you That is how I felt last night.

Absoluteley well said.

I like it how it is. Preety good.

[pre] When you’re devoid of me Eyes sip tears of sorrow Heart crumbles with a sting Mentality hazes And Recollections subside Veins pulse with desire Ravenous for that sensation The ...

Preety interesting.

I can't stretch it enough. When's the next part of it :) It's just getting better and better. Funny but I can picture the characters when I'm reading. Check out ...

Yea a bit of more rhyming would be nice. For example the last line maybe something like... kidnapped by this curse.. Just a thought. I really like it without the ...

Very beautiful poem. Keep writing.