Falcon_Ablaze

Hi, I must say that this is a very nice piece. Just a few small suggestions. Chased by the man, face so pale. "face so pale", sounds a bit strange ...

Thank you all! I really appreciate it.

Wow, thank you all for taking the time to review this. It is much appreciated. Glad you all liked this piece. Amazing, no bashings yet :D . GryphonFledgling: That's cool ...

I did this for a school project. It's kind of in the style of cowboy poetry. A poetry writer I am not so any suggestions are more than welcome! My ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS! First off, I just wanted to say that we do have a rule that you do at least two reviews before begin posting your ...

WAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I had more than 1500 points, but they all disappeared and now I only have 404. What happened?????? HEEEEEEEEEELP!!!!! The points reset themselves to 300 every few weeks. Hop

Hi, No, I didn't fall off the face of the earth but was really close :) . I just realized that I've had this done in my room since January ...

Hiya, Okeydoky, now with the long ago promised critique : P. Me oh my, you got a lot done! I didn't read through the other critiques so sorry if I ...

Hey Briggi, *gapes in amazement* This is great! I love your concept on water. I didn't see anything off with the pattern but I'm not the best at that :wink: ...

Thank you both for taking the time to review my work. Squallz- Thank you so much for giving me your honest opinion. It helps a lot. I must agree with ...

Thank you :D . If you ever want a critique let me know. -Falcon_Ablaze

Thank you :D . I'll work on that.

Thank you both so much! :D I am going to fix that stuff right now. this is probably one of the best I've read so far!!! I highly doubt that ...

Yes. Thank you!! :D :D

Hi, OK, now I'll do chapter 3 :) . After we left the town in a rush, we headed towards a mountain range that’s about half a day hike from ...