Faery007

Hello, I wrote this poem yesterday and I can't figure out how to get rid of the line spacing, does anyone know how? Thanks you for all your comments on ...

The Unbreakable Vow By Hayley, faery007 When you promise you’ll be home, When you promise you’ll never tell, One thing I remember you saying, “We will take the unbreakable vow” ...

Thank you, Angel of Death as well, your critique will help me shape my next poem that I will be submitting shortly ^^

Thank you, Rosey Unicorn, that helped me, it's one of the first poems I have written and so that helped me ^^ I will bear that in mind when I ...

I miss you Every morning I wake up wishing you were there Every night I go to bed saying the same old prayer. Your love means everything to me; without ...

WOW its got an AMAAAAAZING stanza and if ure only 14 then ure sure 2 get noticed!

I think its brill i mean if u dont like it then dont take my word 4 it (i'm only 13!) :roll: