Faery007

Hello I am Hayley and I'll review your poem todayyyy Like KnightlyAngel09 said I absolutely LOVE your opening, it's simple, short and yet doesn't explain too much where your left ...

Hi, I sang this song to my self, and I thought it sounded amazing, and I'm not joking. The words you used were outstanding and I thought the rhythm flowed ...

I'm your best friend but now she is too. Here's where the big problem comes in We are both in love with you The only thing that's different About her ...

Hellooooo! My name is Hayley and I will be your reviewer for today! I'll start with the first stanza and actually finish with it hehe if that makes sense 0_0 ...

Helloooo, I think what your doing is a nice idea and it helps others to get further in their work, here is my poem that I would like you to ...

Hello, I like this poem, very much. That's all there is to say really, I find no faults in the entire poem and I think the imagery is outstanding, the ...

Hi Kat, I would have liked to continued it and make it longer in length but I was worried it might have sounded to repetitive, as I have started each ...

Apologies for the shortness of this poem but as they say, quality, not quantity! It's self explanatory really, any critique is obviously encouraged as usually. Please tell me any grammar ...

Hello, I really like your poem and am not quite sure why no-one has commented on it, I think the rhythm of the poem is very smooth and the stanzas ...

I think I actually disagree with the other reviewers, I think it has a meaning and that the gaps and short sentences build up climax and make you want to ...

Wow, I love the message that is brought across, and I actually really can't find any faults apart from the ones previews reviewers have mentioned, and so this is one ...

Thank you very much, knightlyangel09, that really helped me! I like your review and I now know not to go to overboard on the rhyme, as if I do, I ...

Thank you everyone for all you comments, yes, I do think the rhyming near the end is terribly off, but I did not notice to be honest when I was ...

Written by Hayley Perfection Hard to come by, Impossible to touch Endless perfection, Doesn’t take much, Try to find it and You won’t succeed, Stumble across it And you’ll find ...

hello, My name is Hayley, I don't believe in God to a certain extent but I think it is good that you have shown passion in what you believe and ...