Faery007

He sees her legs are sound and shapely, Lovely metaphor there . firmly planted in the ground: ___ a graceful maple sapling, ___ victim to the Abenaki. If she stands ...

Hi! I'll be doing a short review on this essay, startingggggg now! mmm...It's good but you could do with expanding it a little. Essays are usually 2 pages in length. ...

Wow, for such a young age, you have fantastic potential! Hmm..I couldn't really find any faults with this poem...I loved the imagery and meaning you put into it. You can ...

My little girl - Hayley’s song You can hear it in her voice, You can see it in her smile, Oh, she wants to do you good, She wants to ...

OOH! PLACE PLEASEE! I'll make a male as there's no more female spots left ^^ Name - Dylan Evans Gender - Male Age - 11 Personality - (I'll base it ...

I feel compelled to write a review after what the previous person said ^^ I actually quite like the rhyming of this poem, even if it is a little bit ...

Hayleylucy He is lurking. Sweeping through corridors in an unknown haste. He cannot be avoided neither can he be touched. There is a certain air about him, like uncharted waters ...

wow. I would be happy with this piece of work no matter what people say. The colours look fine to me, if they were too bright then the mood of ...

Wrote this some time ago. Hayleylucy 14 I cannot pretend I love you, When you have chased me away, I cannot pretend I love you, For the day has yet ...

This is about niece, called Poppy, she is nine months old. Your soft blue eyes, Your rosy red cheeks, Your delicate cries, And to think, you are mine. Words can ...

Written By Hayley There is no Enchantment If you think of life like a blank canvas, Waiting to be drawn on The colours and swirls seem far away The enchantment ...

Hi, I actually really like this poem, it shows that life is a bit like a blank canvas that you need to paint it also shows that life has a ...

Love, hate, happiness: these are all abstract concepts. Many, maybe all, poems are, deep down, about emotions and other abstractions, but it's hard to build a strong poem using only ...

Your Poem Is a truly good one, with some amazing words and meanings to it, I am sorry for writing a review that was not mine, I am lazy and ...

Love, hate, happiness: these are all abstract concepts. Many, maybe all, poems are, deep down, about emotions and other abstractions, but it's hard to build a strong poem using only ...