Faery007

Hi, My name is Hayley and I will try to review this! First thing, I loved this, I really did. I enjoyed the comparism between the stars and freckles. Very ...

Why must I sit in stillness and dark? Why must I watch days go past my window? Is there no hope for a grieving soul, captured beneath in a fiery ...

HEYOO! Hi, I'm not much of a reviewer, but I like this. It was kind of sad, but in a strange kind of way. There's nothing specific I would improve, ...

Hi there, I am not a poet, merely a writer. However, you didn't need a poet to tell you that your poem was quite outstanding. I loved a flow of ...

She will never know. She will never know H.Poole She will never know, how you danced in the sun, how you ran in the rain, how you cryed in the ...

OOH Hi, I loved this, poem, the shortness of the sentances, and the powerful, meaning, that is slightly misunderstood in some poeples view was amazing. The complexity of such a ...

Hello! My name is Hayley and I'll be semi-reviewing your poem! So, first off, I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the "organised random-ness" in it. It was sort of ...

I like this poem, it's short but it's sweet. It's need for sympathy is quite overwhelming, and the poem has the same effect of a cute puppy in a window. ...

She will never know. By Hayley P She will never know, how you danced in the sun, how you ran in the rain, how you cryed in the ocean, she ...

Hiya! My name is Hayley, and I'm going to do an ickle review! OK, well even though your poem was in progress, I'll still do a Pro's and Con's thing, ...

Oh.My.Word. What a cute poem! OK, So when I first read it, I didn't see it as cute, I saw it as serious, like death and dying and last words ...

Ahh, my dear! I have to say, after just finshing the works of Edgar Allen Poe, you reminded me so vividly of him. I thought that your poem was very ...

Thank you. Sometimes people need people not for critiques, not for misconceptions, but for thoughts. It's nice to know that after writing it, you liked it. ~ Vi.

By Violet R age 15 It's my life, It's my eyes, And it's my way of living, If I'm black, if I'm white, it's my way of saying, This is ...

Drip, drip, drip. I like the beginning, good start! The room is rank with your fear, Does this mean that you can smell his fear? Try to make it a ...