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Re: Goodbye, Love
Hiya, This poem had a really great concept. You told it in a very clear tone, and the style was so simple which made it easy to read and the ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Visual Commentary
Hiya, I just thought I'd say, I loved the idea of this, very clever! You should make it longer, and OMG sequels! They could fall in love, or be brother ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: I'm new
Hi, it's very good this website! Don't forget to review work as well as submitting work, once you get a good few points under your belt, you can do whatever ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Sky Sisters
Hiya, I like this a lot, it was really nice. You should make it longer, and add some more emotive language to it. I love te way you use the ...
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Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl
Hiya, This is great. I love how you handled a sensitive topic in a mature way. how the men at the pool molested the grass This is beautiful, you've captured ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Dinnertime According to Puppies
Hiya, I love this poem, its so cute! I read it over a few times and your grammer is very good. It has a really cute bouncy flow and you ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Lovesick Loser
Hiya, So, I really liked this, it was sort of fun and slightly sad at the same time. I like the idea of it, and if you keep working on ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Valentine
Hiya, I am working my way through a many poems on YWS as I can..must get top reviewer! MWAHAHAHA :) OK, so first off, I loved the first stanza - ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Swing from the tangles of my heart
Hiya, I thought this was good. It was a very good first attempt at happy poetry! The only thing I would say that needs work is your emotive side. It ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: A final farewell
Hiya, First, let me just say that I loved this poem. I'm 17, and I would kill to write like that! The emotion is raw, and the words are simple. ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: To Love and Hate
Hiya, The title of your poem looked fascinating and I'm on a review mission..! The poem itself is very good, reminds of Edgar Allen Poe, which is very good! Not ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Straight And Narrow
Hiya, First of all, my overall impression is that this is a very good poem. It has good solid foundations and lots of potential. I liked the general idea of ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: A Final Sin
Hiya, I liked this poem, it wasn't too cliche either.. One thing I will say though that was my only negative, make sure the poem flows well. A few parts ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: That Unknown Feeling (Title Pending)
Hi, I really liked this. I don't normally review or even read stories that are based on things such as werewolves, and fairy tales..but I really did like this one! ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: To be God.
OK, so I just need someone to review it, and let me know if it has potential. This is the letter at the beginning from a father to his daughter. ...
Jun 9, 2011