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Only by faith – H.Poole. You can have faith without love but you cannot love without faith. Our love was a beautiful disaster. I was the wreckage and you, the ...

So, me and my big mouth said I would write an extended piece of substantial writing about a sensitive topic. I chose abortion. I'm having serious trouble writing this and ...

This is really nice. The fact that the semantics are so complex but that I contrasted by the simplified narration just makes it really easy to read and there is ...

I love this. 20 like and only 2 comments!? Well, I think I will be changing that! I actually like the ambiguity and the structure is very tastefully done. The ...

I didn't think it was at all terrible! If fact, with a little refining and practice, this could be quite excellent. The idea that you have has great potential to ...

I liked this. Maybe it was just me but I found it obvious that it was a same-sex paring. It was sensitive and done in a mature manner. The grammar ...

Thank you to everyone who commented on this piece, I am so grateful to all of you. I am going to keep writing and hopefully never stop! Dreamwriting2611: Thank you! ...

In all honesty, I loved this. Your style, your punctuation, your semantics. It was all so beautiful. I really wish that I would have written a poem like this. It ...

Only by faith. - H.Poole In your monotropic mind, the idea of the perplexity of marriage encompasses you. You silently question my motives of walking you down the aisle, naked ...

Hiya, I won't be reviewing this fully but I HAD to comment! This is such a lovely poem..I read it twice because I wished I would have wrote it myself! ...

Hiya, I forgot to let you know I came back and reviewed your piece fully :) HAYLEY xx

Hiya, So, first off, I really liked this poem..Even thought there could have been a little more emotive language in it, it was a very good for review. Faces of ...

Hiya, This poem had a really great concept. You told it in a very clear tone, and the style was so simple which made it easy to read and the ...

Hiya again, My message came through twice by accident, don't think I'm trying to spam you or anything :) I get confused easily, sorry about that..it's my lousey genes :( ...

Hiya, This poem had a really great concept. You told it in a very clear tone, and the style was so simple which made it easy to read and the ...