FadingBrighter

Okay guys, I know everyone is anxious to get going. But not everyone can know everyone yet. The Nakia haven't been awakened yet, so the knights have NO IDEA WHO ...

Aden Delilah He'd known it had been her from the very beginning. How could he forget that fawn colore brown hair, those violet eyes that seemed to burn with life. ...

Delilah walked through the empty halls of Ilixandria Academy, heading for the dining hall. Looking out the floor to ceiling windows that lined in the wall, she couldn't help but ...

Okay, I'm going to start, but we are still accepting!

Name:Fey Hetson Gender:male Age(15-20):15, though he looks like he's six. Species:Knight Power(if a Nakia):N/A Appearance(pictures plus a description is preferred):Fey is a young boy who appears to be

The story book will start on Sunday! So please convince anyone whose interested to join!

A story about a group of Girls, called the Nakia, who are forced to go through a series of trials to prove their power. Set in Victorian England, the story ...

Name: Delilah Terwen(called Dolly) Gender:Female Age(15-20): 17 Species:Witch Power(if a Nakia): Life- she is the iris Priestess Appearance(pictures plus a description is preferred): Delilah has long,

It is the year 1848, and England has been reborn into an era of peace and prosperity. The Queen, Victoria, rules with a strong hand and iron will- able to ...

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Niyah couldn't stop laughing, it began as only a giggle then grew. She couldn't help it. The look on Keradon's adorable face as he actually acted like a kid. She ...

so sad... Beautifully written, but, as others have said before, you not only change tense but change from 'her' to 'you'. This is confusing because you don't have any transitions, ...

Good start, but for a short story this really leaves to much out. I know you only have 250 words, but... I was way confused. Your main character talks about ...

The smell of blood and burnt flesh stung his nostrils as the golden metal pulled from his skin. Teeth crushing against one another as another blow hit him in the ...

Great work!