FadeWriter

Wow, I like the messege a lot, very relatable! But I just have one thing, it doesn't really flow. I know you are trying to rhyme, but something just isn't ...

I can see what you were trying to do, but I didn't really understand it too well. It wasn't very clear, I'll try and clarify: Lies did fall from your ...

The rain poured outside the dark hallway window. Every drip slowly slid down to the sill making a small puddle into a tiny pond scattered with dead flies and dust ...