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Chapter 1 Introduction "DING!! DONG!!" The church bells rang. Their sounds covered the streets and the Kingdome like a blanket of joy. People danced in the street and cried tears ...

Omg it SUCKED OUT LOUD!! JKS JKS JKS!! it's SUPER good!!! i can't wait to read the rest. And how do you pronounce the word saase?? Anywayz, it's really good!! ...

it's nice!! Just one question. The words of this song sounds like it would be rock song. Is it a rock song? Anyways, i luv the part when you write ...

omg it was really good!! it sounded like it was from the heart. More poems should be like that; from the heart :D

Thx! the song is sang like a ballad but with a modern beat and twist. I try to encorperate the music with my vocal skills as much as possible to ...

Thanks for the advice, I'll try to fix it. Sorry about the grammar, i'm not english... But I'll try to find them.. thanks again

Sunshine Chorus You were my sunshine, my only sunshine You made me happy, my skys are grey You'll never notice how much I love you So please don't take my ...

I really like it!1 and i agree with the post before me!

it's really good, well structured and i love how you dildn't make it rhyme ( poeple think it's a crime to not make it rhyme). But I have a heard ...

Omg!!! It's sooo good!! i thought u said that u suck at poem writing :o . I just wrote that poem i wrote in ur agenda on the site but ...

He'll never know the love that's locked up deep inside He'll never know little girl in my that always tries to hide He'll never know the joy of being wrapped ...

Your right about the three characters. The plot of the three girls, are sortas messed up. I was thinking that Amy should be those jealous girls that are really posessive, ...

Okay, this is going to be my first story on the site, I don't have a title for it yet but if you have any ideas,please tell me. The story ...

Omg!! it's soo good Jessica!! Imma gonna put ma poem online and u must write more poems.!! :P

it's good!!