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I really like this! But I think that the story in general is kind of scaring though.. It makes me wonder what you really dream about when you're asleep in ...

It's not bad; But the chorus seems kind of irritating as was stated before. I would suggest revising also... But keep up the work.

I agree, but other then that it was really great; I hope to read more of your lyrics

Poem about poetry Poem, oh Poem! This is my ode to thee Poem of poem Making meer words into a symphony A symphony, a symphony Filled with metaphors and hyperboles ...

This is a very good poem. I liked it how as they said before you can kind of walk down the street and sing this. GREAT JOB!

they have a point, don't make the words bold or put symbols. But good poem anyways

I have to agree with Amice with the "envelops my heart with a bountiful love". But I still have a great passion for chocolate. Thanka alot!! you gave me a ...

ok, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the constructive critisism :P

There is a treasure, Such as no other. With something inside That cannot be measured... Emralds of Chance, Garnets of honesty. Diamonds and Rubies, And pearls and Amethysts. Gold of ...

The suicide speaks My time is comming... I can't take it anymore! The pain, the mysery, the agony the lonelyness My time is now... Don't tell me your sorry It's ...

thx 4 the constructive critisism. It WAS froces ryhming because it's sum gay english thing Ang it was supposed to be a humersitic metaphor Anywayz, ya

I am me I am who I am That’s all I can be The person who runs my life is me I’m no queen of Siam Or some other country ...

thx for the advice ! I love ya too!!*hugs* OMG did u know that twenty minutes ago, I was looking at the plots of my stories and I discoverd that ...

I liked he part that said " our love is our plotline " overall, it's really good, but I have to agree with the previous posts and that it sounds ...

it was really good!! It almost made me cry!! keep up the good work!! :)