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Alright, below is a bit from the first chapter in a Summer project I'm beginning called "The Leader of the Band." Most of the elements found in this book-in-the-making are ...

This is something I just scribbled up for my best friend Alex after probablyt the most important thing in his life was taken away from him: his lab Sable. Sable ...

...EMO!!!! lol Well, with a little work it could be really good! :)

I actually liked it. I really liked it. The idea was great, the use of vocabulary was amazing, and I found almost no errors with the rhythm. I thought it ...

This is an okay start. Nothing really stood out that bugged me (except for some grammar mistakes). I like it because you really got to know the characters. The beginning ...

This is the first part to the first chapter of my first novel which will be the first of my first book series :lol: I've been working on this book ...

This is a sad attempt at making fun of Christianity. If taking potshots at the validity of Mary being a virgin makes you swell with some sort of gross pride ...

I honestly don't know what to say--I really don't. I don't know what the heck I thought. I don't know if it was good, or bad, or weird, or strange, ...

Ok, You're completely in the right on the rhyming bit. As for the rest, I suppose we'll just agree to disagree, then? That sounds good to me. :-)

Whoa. random rhyme = funky. also, I'm pretty sure "corners me down" is against some grammar law or another. Why exactly wouldyour ears get red when you're terrified? -confused- Oh, ...

My inspiration for this poem was not William Carlos Williams, nor Robert Frost. It was something bigger: Music. Hope you like it! Life’s Score Life is a song, Starting out ...

Wow...this was REALLY good! Oh my gosh, this poem is amazing! The unique comparison of people to plants is very nicely done. This is a really good poem!

I...don't know what to say--it was weird, it was hard to follow, it was not the good weird. It was really strange and the lack of punctuation made it harder ...

I wrote this a long time ago in the third grade, so it's not Robert Frost or Lewis Carroll or anything. Little mice, Scurrying around. One just sniffs, The other ...

I have three words for this. W. O. W. This poem blew me away--the message is clear, yet so dark. I really enjoyed the use of repetition. You should keep ...