FRAYEDjade

Danger felt ambiguous, like the smell of bitter coffee, as the Tram ambled up the rough and broken pavement of future highway 1106. The Site looming ahead wasn’t scheduled for ...

Hey there. This poem caught my eye because I also happen to love Sylvia Plath. I definitely think that this is a good poem. Lots of imagery, a good rhyme ...

I'm always impressed at people who can rhyme well, and you certainly do. This poem's AAAB rhyme scheme is great, not forced or over-the-top. It has a nice lilting quality ...

I really liked this, I liked it's simplicity as well as its obscure structure. You definitely have a few great moments in here. My favorites were "of blood and bones ...

Aw, this is adorable.

I do a lottt of research before buying a book. I have learned from the past that the quality of the cover is not always synonymous with the quality of ...

This needs a little TLC. Her knuckles were an iridescent white as she scrubbed out the pots in the sink. Tiny water droplets peppered her blue, cotton dress. Midmorning glinted ...

We are the inevitable roses that shoot from cement cracks, Not all white. A new race of linguists, Our highly analytical minds translating every nuance From a language of pure ...

Hey, how are you? I'm Jade by the way. I also think that this poem is quite good. When I read your disclosure before the actual poem and then the ...

I wake up and my field of vision is alive and teeming with fresh static trying to force me under again. I’m covered in a strangling and liberating sweat from ...

You know you're a writer when your nightmares have character dynamics.

Hi there. I'm Jade, nice to meet you. First of all, I do really like your story. I think your writing style is fresh and unique, and while some might ...

theloverwhotries There's a winner.

Perfect.

I liked the whole idea of this poem, the keys and the locked hearts, it's good imagery. But I'm not sure that I actually liked the poem itself. I felt ...