FRAYEDjade

Where I live Seasons are experienced on the back porch. Fifteen by thirty feet of Trex, Upholstered seating, And Atlas Spinning his macrocosmic merry-go-round. Summer in the suburbs, A breathtaking ...

Will you review mine? I'd love some other opinions.

Want to take a look at mine? I'd love some other opinions.

The scrawling of his pen was the only noise to fill up the room. The sun hung its four o’clock angle to send lazy beams through the high, cathedral windows. ...

I love this. It's so complete and well rounded. I love that you portrayed a story as well as internal conflict. You have so few words but I can feel ...

Hi. :) I love that you wrote this poem about Irene. It was a poem that needed to be written. Anyhow, I love the idea of it. Your mixed feelings ...

Hi. I'm Jade. I like your poems. Poem #1 I really like your language here. Your way of describing the ordinary with unusual language is very pretty. Although I like ...

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Desert compulsion Sucks As life twists Two hundred by two hundred. A little box of bipolar Weather Bloated and lovesick with moisture. Some various battlecries Sing out through my pores ...

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Hey if you could take a look at this, that'd be great. -> Thank you!

I'd love some opinions on this particular piece: Thanks. (:

This beginning scene needs help and I'm sick of working through it. Thoughts? Do you like the way I ended? Do you have a better idea? I'd love your input. ...

I don' know if I truly understand the poem/title relationship here. With the title 'Fighting With Tenacity' I expected there to be fighting... with tenacity. But the only thing this ...

Part One: It wasn’t much, just a bit of open field covered in grash. Abandoned buildings created the perimeter on both the right and the left, ugly barely differentiating structures ...