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Re: 6200 ch. 7
Seven As Benny started the Tardis up, I realized that I had missed its noise. There wasn’t really a word in English for it. I decided I could make up ...
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Re: 6200 ch. 6
Six It is quiet in my cell. Very quiet. One of those Quiets that is just quiet. Also I might be going crazy. I tap a staccato beat on the ...
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Re: 6200 ch. 5
Five I hate shopping. Loathe it, but it is necessary. The terrible burden of normality must be born. I had to get what I needed, but shopping was something I ...
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Re: 6200 ch. 4
Four “Shopping.” Alice looked at me blankly. “What?” “After all that, all we’re doing is shopping?” She said, “Why teach me to use the gun at all?” “It is better ...
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Re: 6200 ch. 3
Three “The house is a time machine?” It didn’t seem too crazy, mostly because I had accepted it as a spaceship. “Yes,” She seemed satisfied that I had grasped it. ...
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Re: 6200 ch. 2
Two “It’s time to start the rest of my life,” I thought ironically. It’s been a couple days. Benny had been very kind. She didn’t talk, just changed the wrapping ...
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Re: 6200 ch. 1
One I sat up and looked around. I was disoriented from my recurring nightmare, trapped in the past, wondering where I was. Then I remembered. I was in the Andes ...
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Re: 6200 forward
Forward I stared as my home was ransacked. The Strange Ones were destroying my house! The way they moved was slow and hypnotizing; when they spoke it caused panic in ...
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Re: Dark Angel (the play)
Actually, this is a short story of mine that I translated into a play for a production we are doing in school. The wording is a little "jacked up" Actually, ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Dark Angel (the play)
(Nathanial stands in a doorway made of pvc pipe. There are tendrils of gauze hanging down, settling on his shoulders. He looks triumphant. He wears something that gives the impression ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: An Artificial Matrimony.
I personally love pieces on the loss of free will. They make me cry! Woot! But this belongs in romantic shorts, not general fiction. Important Questions: Why? Why did they ...
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Re: Wanting to fly
um... Hon? Are you OK? I think the date on this post is scary...
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Re: Political Correctness: Drawing the Line
Howdy! Ok, from a strictly flow-oriented view, (like you asked in your before-writing comment) I thought it was stiff. The language you used was extremely hard-to-follow. Don't get me wrong, ...
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Re: The Things I Thought Before I Died: Part Three
I really liked this. Wow. I thought it was... disoriented. That was the feeling in the piece. Scary. It make me feel like I do when I am dreaming about ...
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Re: Saving Lilly~Chapter Six (Ten years ago)
Weird! I liked it. I don't know why. I think it was too short to be a chapter, but it was Ok. I think you should combine it with another ...
Sep 2, 2010
