FLyerS

You are disturbed :shock:

Very powerful. I like the last lines, about freedom of speech and the right to remain silent. In fact, you're too good. You are making me feel bad about my ...

Words and stories, tales afar, Times of peace and times of war love and conquest, battles won, trial lost, and quests begun dark proposals, writ in blood cunning thieves and ...

Is this about Twilight? because if it is, don't waste your talent writing about something that is now so common place. Everyone is writing about that story. Don't be every ...

That was amazing. I loved it. You really spoke from your heart. Your flow excellent, with one rhythm flaw in the last line. You are a very good poet. sweeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!

It was really good, except for one minor detail: in the first two lines you used "seem" twice. Was that for effect?

Well, I think that was good. I don't know if you care, but personally, I like a perfect sense of rhythm in my poetry. I would switch a couple of ...