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haha You sound like a real hermit. REMEMBER! True genius is a messy and lonesome road. And about the smileies, I LOVE them!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :elephant: :elephant: ...

haha You sound like a real hermit. REMEMBER! True genius is a messy and lonesome road. And about the smileies, I LOVE them!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :elephant: :elephant: ...

Two It was time to start the rest of my life, I thought wryly. It had been three days. Benny had been especially understanding. She didn’t talk, just changed the ...

Socks are amazing. :elephant:

I agree.

I like what you're trying to accomplish, but honestly I was bored through the whole thing. Use more powerful words. Don't let them fall flat. You were being way to ...

Heay!!! check out the first chapter before reading this! It's on my featured works!... :oops: if I can figure out how to use it!

Two It was time to start the rest of my life, I thought wryly. It had been three days. Benny had been especially understanding. She didn’t talk, just changed the ...

Broken hearted souls, you are welcome here tonight. C rying infants who were abandoned, come You who need the love of one another, Gather under the cedar tree your home. ...

God's children, they are young and small, But God collects and keeps them all. When He lays them down to sleep, He keeps their dreams from things that creep. He ...

Very descriptive! But you need to work out a few small flow changes. This type of writing is very much like poetry or music. You must let it flow to ...

Forward I stared as my home was ransacked. The Strange Ones were destroying my house! The way they moved was slow and hypnotizing; when they spoke it caused panic in ...

Oh. My. God. You just summed up every teenager's view of their parents. Sometimes you just want them to let you GO! :smt059 :smt051 Awesome! And, I liked how you ...

actually, I thought the repetativness added effect. It made the poem sound more rhythmic, but if you're going to do that, you need to use exact repetativeness.

TOTALY AGREE!!!!! Have you seen that poster that says: CENCORSHIP HAS BEEN FOUND TO CAUSE BLINDNESS IN CHILDREN.? Any way... you should talk to me the next time you're online. ...