FLyerS

I think that until a child is born, it has no soul, mind, or anything. So is it really murder? But then again, Murder is defined as one human killing ...

Lukas8u, I find your message at the bottom of your post intriguing. click here for all LIBERAL politics? To my limited understanding, 'Liberal' is a tiny bit of politics. Are ...

OK, Take a deep breath, Then try to pronounce the full name of my main character. She's from the future, and due to overpopulation, they have to come up with ...

OOh. Ouch. May I suggest you act on your anger? :twisted:

Sweet, no one worth mentioning would take a chainsaw to something you wrote from the bottom of your heart. You did a fine job describing life's futility and rebirth, the ...

Ahhh... Music to my ears :smt020 Your poem captures the warmth and peace of summer I especially like the first two lines. The imagery here is amazing I didn't understand ...

Out of the darkness Into the light God was the planner we pay the price When we were still young, to young to have learned we were faced with a ...

Noncence freakling ruules. aWesomme. $$$$ WEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! :elephant: Keep it up or the ruler of the universe will be displeaced. we dont want Thaaaaaaat, do wee? Good. now keep beeen cannfusing ...

It is beautiful. I hate to say that any work needs work, because we put so much into the original copy, but some of the things I read were incorrect. ...

:wink: Don't worry about conventions. I don't think they're neccesary in this particular peice of poetry. Perfect punctuation pleases people, but imperfect intuitiveness is interesting. I insist, insp

About the spelling and things, I like to put "hiddens" in my poetry. Hiddens are things that are weird and add (I think) to the poetry. If you look hard, ...

rough waters under my boat never stop thought I could handle rough waters. out of my boat now under my boat now gasping for aid hang on Waisting river all ...

I Love It I love it I LOVE it! I read them all!!! Keep writing them!!! this is gonna turn steamy isn't it! I can sence it!!! Wow! OK. Now ...

um... sorry about the four posts in a row... my computer's freaking out :oops: It took me forever to figure out where my computer was posting them. :oops: sorry!

HI I'm FLyerS! I'm newish here. I realy like this website! When you're thirteen, it's hard to get people to review your work. Sooo, This place is Awesome!!!!! Don't wory, ...