FLyerS

Very cool.

This is a cool, powerful poem No one can see me For who I really am In the dark is where I be Hidden by the judging, damn I think ...

yay! first to review! Very good theme, but I think you should look at the rhythm. Sometimes it trips over itself, you should ad nothing words or take away nothing ...

All 'typos' are purposeful. They create hidden meaning.

I open the window. The rain pours down onto my face as I lean out. The smell of the rain permeates my room. A little space in the Fate's tall ...

Hey! Uh, I like it, but cut the entire first bit. Yeah, all of it. Those four little lines are Brilliant. Dat's all you need, chicka bee. Oh, Itsallme_2003, aren't ...

Ok, Hi! I'm FLyerS! I will review smallish pieces of poetry. They have to be smallish because i have a really short attention span. All you have to do is ...

It's not good for you to hold in so much emotion, especially in poetry. Let it out. You didn't say why your world was crashing down, you didn't say really ...

Hi Chicka Bee! OK, The first thing I have to ask you is, Are you feeling alright? You said that you had never written about experiences before. Was this an ...

This reminds me of that one poem, Annabell Lee. It truly is beautiful. I definitely liked it. You might want to consider publishing it. If you do, tweak the layout ...

darko.demark666, Well, This poem doesn't really follow a line formula. It doesn't really follow a rhyme formula. the only formula is, two words in the first bit, three in the ...

Two lovers Hearts burning, Ever dancing Snake-like bodies On they dance Until the night Leaves their wings Isolating a certain princess Singing in her tower Entirely too graceful to dance, ...

No, no, rlw92, I don't think that's what it was about at all. I think, if you will forgive me if I am incorrect, saily.kiwalkar, that this poem is more ...

That was beautiful. I do not know if I can accurately say anything about this powerful poem Another day dawns. Halogen hemisphere, polishing the grass-blades until they throw light around ...

That was beautiful. I do not know if I can accurately say anything about this powerful poem Another day dawns. Halogen hemisphere, polishing the grass-blades until they throw light around ...