FLyerS

ancient paganistic religions were centered more around trying to understand the world around us than on any concept of the afterlife. That is, the religion was geared toward explaining natural ...

I gaze out the half-open curtain at the moon. Tonight she was a crescent, so small that my old eyes could barely see her. The moon was the thinnest I ...

I had no problems with the plot of the story, but keep working on the English!

This is definitely a beginning to a story. Some of the grammar is weird, you call things different names... I don't know... Are you from India? that would explain the ...

This poem is redundant. :smt102 I'm sorry, but you need to do something else besides restating what you already said in reverse order. "The sky is blue Blue is the ...

CLICHED!!! RE-A-LY CLICHED. Love poems are always cliched. Revenge is also cliched. Use more metaphors. WAY more metaphors. I mean it. Finding the right words for love is almost impossible ...

You are such a good writer. I have a challenge for you. Write something happy!

Wow. That be powerful stuff. You should watch form though. This is a narrative, not a poem. Technically.

boom -boom boom -boom Your heartbeat boom -boom boom -boom Is constant boom -boom boom -ba-boom my heartbeat ba -boom-boom ba- boom-boom will falter boom -boom boom -boom Your heartbeat ...

I don't usually go for country songs, but this was... good. I say that grudgingly because I don't like country. From a purely literary standpoint, I liked the end, with ...

I thought the first line was cliched, but the flow was good. I enjoyed this poem, but the last stanzas were odd. Not bad, just odd. They added to the ...

I thought your comparison of poetry and dancing was excellent. Dancer's poetry is in movement, not sound. Flow was good, and so was texture. (my word for: the feel of ...

A nice poem,the topic is over used, but I can deal... The flow was tripping, but I think that in this case that added to the sweetness. Just a little ...

umm... yeah. I know it sucks. I was cheeting by increasing my post count... p.s. lol

Actually, I think it's illigel because of old people and insurance. Let's think about this practicly. And by practicly i mean in tearms of money. If you could legaly commit ...