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? Usually I at least pretend to understand weird art. (it's an image thing.) but this... this didn't make any sense. I was confused the whole time. I didn't like ...

One of the dandelions on the ceiling is oozing puss, but the teapot in the TV set is not talking to my left shoe. An oddly-specific attendant at a ring-tasting ...

Wow, lots of multi-postage! I think you should say on the last line "Crash to the ground" or something. It sounds more dramatic than "float in midair"

Suckup... :) In as a poem, this isn't perfect, but the sentiment is sweet.

yhummmm. I feel warm. GREAT imagery! Makes me feel like taking a road trip! At first, I was suspicious of your paragraph breaks, but as I read your poem, I ...

Hey... I have to say, I liked the idea behind this, but the plot was un-followable. I couldn't tell what you were trying to do! I couldn't tell what was ...

So... uh... Do you have a girlfriend? Just kidding. Your too old for me anyway. But I loved that poem! Wow. Just...Wow. It needs some work rhythmically. But the voice ...

This make me giggle. Have you noticed that rock songs always sound funny without the music. I'll try to imagine it with rock music! *strains* ah. Got it. Ok. this ...

Hey. Just so you know, I think this piece was over-reviewed. It came off as fake, like something you would see on TV. It seemed like a steriotype of every ...

Hello Darling, This is your first post, so I'll go easy on you... But after this I'll rip you apart... unless it is good, which is always a possibility. I ...

As the soda flowed up and around the entire world the ghost of Moses was all like "Hey God... um, I hate to bother you, but didn't you promise us ...

I feel like taking this piece, which was the first thing on the list, in chronological order, and placing it in first place in anti-chronilogical order. (Thus making it the ...

Why am I not a Christian? Some people would view this as an attack on you. I don't. If you want to tell me why you are a Christian, I ...

we are nothing but voices. nothing but words to be heard. we are too many voices. we are not begging to be heard. we are heard. we are heard around ...

To those of you who know me, I want you to know, I didn’t want this for myself. I wouldn’t wish this on anyone. Don’t worry though, it didn’t hurt. ...