FLyerS

The picture and the story don't go together. The poem is about a demon-creature, or that's what it sounds like, bringing pain to human souls. The picture is of a ...

This poem has no plot. Whatsoever. none. It doesn't have a beginning or end, or even middle. It is a sentence. It has good feeling, so it is a little ...

I really liked the format on this poem, The way it came to a literal climax, and then descended into a resolution. It was perfect for the feeling, the almost-numbness ...

Good morning. Your poem was good. It held a certain bitter-sweetness. As the the narrator was healing the other, she was healing herself. Well written.

This is a poem. Technically. I want you to do something for me. Read "Annabell Lee" by Poe. Now I don't expect you to be as good a Poe, but ...

Ok. Just so you know, I hate love poems. Hate them with a burning passion. Love poems suck up a writers time and energy, and when they are complete, they ...

Ah, the beauty of my land surpasses even that of heaven. I live on the mountains so I can see so many wonders. If there were no such thing as ...

I'm reviewing you. Very pretty tree.

First off, I liked how you took conventional sayings, and changed the tenses or grammar. I also liked the secondary name, in bold. I think you should make that the ...

Well, from a purely form-oriented standpoint, that was not a poem. It was a story. But once you get to reading it, you can see poetic elements in it. No ...

That is so... Empowering. I loved it. The way you said the Can you hear me now was just a little repetitive, but not enough to detract from the poem. ...

I think you should have stopped the poem half way through. After that it just got repetitive, and at the end...clingy. Don't act like that in real life. Guess what? ...

I liked the title. The incorrect grammar of the title was endearing. I hope you know, behavior like that with an actual girl will get you shanked by her girlfriends, ...

I interpreted it as a dead body, that the narrator knew, but there was hope that the soul previously in the body would be born again. But I don't know... ...

The way you made the outside world look over the mother-not-to-be is both detracting and appealing. It is good the first and last times were well written, but the middle ...