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Beautiful. The way it was arranged was lovely. Almost.... floral. I felt connected to the narrator. I was on their team.

It was ok. I was bord. Write something not about love

DING DING DING Acceptable love poem award goes to: Ignacia!!!! WOOOOOOOO Check some other love poems I have reviewed. You will see what an honor this is. In the tenth ...

I enjoyed this. It was... truthful. Expand.

Accurate use of the term whore. For this I will not shank you for writing love poetry Don't do it again.

Expand on the stillborn idea, don't just use it as an analogy, use it as the situation.

This is much better. Not totally energy-sucking. Although, as it is a poem about doing nothing, there's nothing doing. No interest. No POP. Expand on the poem. Think on the ...

Good title Suckish poem. I know what your poems lack. Originality. Try to write a poem by yourself from now on. Stay away from the love theme.

Hello Animia, I hate love poems. The language in this one was awkward. Overall, I didn't like it. I'm going easy on you 'cuz your a newb. You can do ...

Wow. That poem was not powerful. It was not unique. It was not even very emotional. Barely sentimental. Pathetic. Yeah, I'm cruel. Very cruel. But it was horrible. In my ...

In honor of this sickly-sweet day, I am writing mock-love-poetry feel free to tear it to pieces My lover's hair is as soft as a burlap sack I stroke his ...

I like it. It makes my tummy twinkle. It tastes like bubble gum.

I liked it. It didn't have a fixed rhythm, but it was rhythmic. It made me feel... like all in this life is for nothing, because the Fox will get ...

You speak to me, and I speak back, but do not meet your eyes. You think its odd that when we speak I tell you nought but lies. You ask ...

This would be a good song, but as it is about love, it wouldn't be a good poem. You chose the right forum. Thank you. This song is... pure emotion. ...