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  • Lyrics Re: Her Parents Are Xenophobes And She Knows It

    As with all songs posted on this site, this song would be much better if we could hear it. I think that with the right melody and proper emotion from ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Memoirs of a Side-Kick

    It's a nice day to go hiking. Overcast, cool. Warm enough to not need a hat, but perhaps later I'll need an umbrella. I am taking a break on the ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Chemical love

    I thought this was the cutest chemical poem that I have ever come across. You may want to check some of your facts, though. Also, Some of the wording should ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Chemical love

    I thought this was the cutest chemical poem that I have ever come across. You may want to check some of your facts, though. Also, Some of the wording should ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The (Really) Rough Road to Independence

    I feel like this is part of a much larger book, It sounds like an article in a history textbook. It's kinda interesting, though. Perhaps you could try to make ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever

    LO frickin L

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Other Re: F*** you

    The odds of becoming a professional football player, (no matter what sport you call "football") is less than being struck by lightening. You are more likely to be mauled by ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Song

    Thanks for the review. It's funny, though, you say the lyrics should be "I've been" but in normal speech (at least around where I live) "I been" is just how ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Song

    My first kiss was a goodbye kiss, my my my first word was goodbye, you can’t keep me to yourself, no no matter how hard you try, OHHHH I been ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Getting Over It and Maybe you.

    OK, um, this poem had me wanting for a comma. COMMAS are where the reader stops to take a break and collect her thoughts. This line here was almost impassable. ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dreaming: a sailor's image

    The rhyming seemed forced, the grammar was off, and the rhythm wasn't consistent. You need to make sure the poem is readable before posting. I didn't like it. It seemed ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Loose Change

    The penny's backdrop is the Lincoln Monument, not the White House. So, there's that. Also, Lincoln's is the only face that faces right, instead of left, as most coins face. ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Other Re: we are less than the sum of our parts

    Lets start this with cars. Did you know that a car is actually worth less if it is whole? In running condition, a car is worth more to the owner ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Never Ending Story 1

    The new race of humans isn't especially large, the entire group consists of about a thousand members who survived the soda flood. They fly of in their spaceship, to rescue ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Other Re: Talkin Bout My ... Generation

    Yeah. I agree. fricken ironic.

    Jul 1, 2011


The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath