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Re: Her Parents Are Xenophobes And She Knows It
As with all songs posted on this site, this song would be much better if we could hear it. I think that with the right melody and proper emotion from ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Memoirs of a Side-Kick
It's a nice day to go hiking. Overcast, cool. Warm enough to not need a hat, but perhaps later I'll need an umbrella. I am taking a break on the ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Chemical love
I thought this was the cutest chemical poem that I have ever come across. You may want to check some of your facts, though. Also, Some of the wording should ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Chemical love
I thought this was the cutest chemical poem that I have ever come across. You may want to check some of your facts, though. Also, Some of the wording should ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The (Really) Rough Road to Independence
I feel like this is part of a much larger book, It sounds like an article in a history textbook. It's kinda interesting, though. Perhaps you could try to make ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
LO frickin L
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: F*** you
The odds of becoming a professional football player, (no matter what sport you call "football") is less than being struck by lightening. You are more likely to be mauled by ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Song
Thanks for the review. It's funny, though, you say the lyrics should be "I've been" but in normal speech (at least around where I live) "I been" is just how ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Song
My first kiss was a goodbye kiss, my my my first word was goodbye, you can’t keep me to yourself, no no matter how hard you try, OHHHH I been ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Getting Over It and Maybe you.
OK, um, this poem had me wanting for a comma. COMMAS are where the reader stops to take a break and collect her thoughts. This line here was almost impassable. ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Dreaming: a sailor's image
The rhyming seemed forced, the grammar was off, and the rhythm wasn't consistent. You need to make sure the poem is readable before posting. I didn't like it. It seemed ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Loose Change
The penny's backdrop is the Lincoln Monument, not the White House. So, there's that. Also, Lincoln's is the only face that faces right, instead of left, as most coins face. ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: we are less than the sum of our parts
Lets start this with cars. Did you know that a car is actually worth less if it is whole? In running condition, a car is worth more to the owner ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: The Never Ending Story 1
The new race of humans isn't especially large, the entire group consists of about a thousand members who survived the soda flood. They fly of in their spaceship, to rescue ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Talkin Bout My ... Generation
Yeah. I agree. fricken ironic.
Jul 1, 2011
