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Hello Ginny ! Giddy ....Ginny.... Giddy.... Ginny ............ He he he he he! I've been too long in the Arcade ........ PM me sometime if you're stuck or just bored ...

Hey Little Tin !! If you're stuck PM me and I'll try to help with anythin' . Hope to see you swimming ( or rusting, can a tin fish swim ...

Dia Duit !! Conas ata tu? ( :evil: blooming fadas) Hey I'm Eyes ! I'm speak a bit of Gaeilge.... or try to anyway :oops: PM me if you want ...

Okay it's short. Very short. But please crit anyway. I will elaborate on it at some stage. * biggest puppy eyes* She smiled. A fleeting memory had crossed the netherregions ...

:cry: You explore emotion very well . I am going to nit pick though - The chemo therapy draining all the energy out of his small frame Should it be ...

:D Heya Doe !! I'm Eyes PM me if you want anything or your work is slow getting critiqued and I'll look into it for you ..... :shock: I make ...

Hey it was good ! :D There were a few things that I don't think are quite perfect ! feeling as if a testicle had lodged itself in his stomach ...

I actually enjoyed it ! I lurve description which there is a LOT of in this piece!! XD

:D This is really good !! Our very own hole to heaven, lined with opium and discordant hymms. We'll poke our heads up through the concrete clouds, to be greeted ...

There was blood everywhere - it flowed almost in streams from her body. Her head was pounding and as she raised her hand to her head she could feel shards ...

Very nice . You create suspense well. It's very good. The only thing I would change , and this is only a suggestion, but I would elaborate more on whats ...

Ohh fab! I liked the way you presented the nightmare; it's sorta like a flashback - but it isn't. It's really unusual. :D Very interesting ! Is there a chapter ...

Hello ! I'm Eyes and I see you ............... have a sister here cool!! :wink: I guess there won't be much need for you to PM me so but you ...

He he he ........ :D :lol: " Where did I leave my underware," she cried , clearly distressed, " I was only wearing them yeasterday". :roll: Yea I know........

The eyes are the windows to the soul. You get a glipse of it every time you read one of my posts!!