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Well helllloo!!!!!!! :D Hi I'm Eyes !! Still not quite sure where Guam is (can't find an atlas :oops: ) but it sounds pretty cool anyway ! I'm here to ...

It is quite interesting ! However it is very hard to read. Maybe you could split it up into more defined paragraphs? Kaerak pulled her tattered cloak tighter ......... She ...

Ooh very good ! :D You kept me interested the whole way through. You're fab. at creating suspense :) . There is just one little thing ... Oh yes, the ...

Okay .... Hello ! Trust me you won't be leaving here in a hurry ! This site is ADDICTIVE . I am Eyes ( as you can see ...) and ...

He he :lol: . It's very funny and I so know what you're talking about! However , :evil: I have some reservations about the final two lines. They seem to ...

Points are like YWS currency. You use them to play games or to post articles in the randomness or lounge . You earn them by crit other peoples work or ...

:evil: THOSE points could be spent on more important things like games and ....games .....

It's very musical ... you kinda want to sing it!! It's really good 'cause it captures that feeling of desperation and annoyance very well... Rather than racing And demanding it ...

After reading the story I do agree that the title is a wee bit misleading but hey,in my humble opinion, it adds suspense to the piece 'CAUSE we know there ...

Vroom !! *Waves purple light saber enthuastically * Heee ! Hi . If you need any help or anything I'm here to be PMd. Okay ! I will do my ...

Hello! Sorry I've taken so long to critique. After reading it I am REALLY sorry !! It's fab ! :) It's kinda got that "Harry Potter" charm about it. It's ...

I agree with Firestarter. This whole thing has been blown way out of proportion. Britain and America has neclear power and yet there is no "neuclear threat" to all the ...

Okay going to fix all those things now... Thanks emotionless it does help. Thanks Sam. That's reassuring :D :wink:

Bambi is really a member of a cute looking alien race who want to take over the earth with a *gasps for breath* flood of tears and energy generated by ...

Hey! *Hums pink panther tune * Dum da-dum da-dum da-dum da-dum da da da dummmmmm......... Hey! Welcome to YWS. I'm Eyes and I'm looking forward to reading and critiqing your ...