Extraterrestial

If somethings not quite right please speak your mind, and point me in the right directions. Prologue The sun beamed down upon the magical forests inhabitants. Mischievous Water Nymphs played ...

Legends Of The Night Prologue You may think Thieves and Murderous psycho’s are scary but think again, think back to the spooky fairy tails a relative has told you. Think ...

Yeah...umm, where is your opening exactly? All I see is 'Hope you enjoy my opening'. If you only submitted that, then you should click 'Edit' and include your actual story. ...

Hope you enjoy my opening

hope you liek it.Please if you dont please give me some pointerson how to improve

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hope you like it It was a warm summer day. The sun beamed down scorching the people of London. A massive building stood out from the rest, it had big ...

if any ideas please post me

Thanks now i read it, i can see what you mean, do u think you could give us a hand of introducing the character and conflict

i dont get what you mean cuz i did copy and paste it.

i thought the discription was fab but im lost cuz i aint read the other three chapters, but so far it sound good. Maybe you called give me some pointers ...

enjoy

i know its an extremely short opening, i just wanted you views about it so here it is.