Extraterrestial

The Truth Hurts “You two must be the twin brothers, Cesar and Alex.” said the stranger pointing at the twins. “As much as this is a shock to me I’m ...

i'm i boy of few words Brilliant

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Same as aedomir alli could see was 'i' post ot agian and i might actually read it.

Same as aedomir alli could see was 'i' post ot agian and i might actually read it.

Chapter two Politics The hall was spacious, and in it were many rows of benches. Its royal carpet ran all the way up to the emperors golden throne. The stone ...

WTH im criting you dumass

shrek, just to let you know that the guy above beat you to the grammar and i have already corrected them.

shrek, just to let you know that the guy above beat you to the grammar and i have already corrected them.

Alot of your sentences do not start with a capital letter e.g I instead of i Also there are some spelling mistakes such as: flwing should be changed to flowing ...

Thanks for the the tips, it looks like i need them lol. But anyway what exactly do you mean by periods. Also i thank you for correcting my there to ...

The forgotten secret The Stranger Rome was a beautiful city, with its towering lush green trees, swaying with the gently summer breeze and its clear blue sky, stretching out across ...

i liked it until the bit when clumbo got attacked, it left me wondering because it wasn't explained in any detail what so ever. So if you could add more ...

The towering lush green trees, swayed with the gently summer breeze. The clear blue sky, stretched out in the horizon. Birds perched themselves on the arms of trees, singing until ...

Grammar mistakes- looking for thing to help him. looking for things to help him just something i picked up on.