Extraterrestial

This was exenlent and fun too read but with a few errors but they're miner so i'll leave them out so keep writting. I havn't read the other chapters, but ...

I thought it was a good piece and a good read, but i was little lost and confused but apart from that i coldn't spot any errors so keep up ...

Sorry this post is way too late, but i'm posting this anyway. I thought this was a great death scene, and was really gripping. lol wish i could write like ...

Thanks, but i recently edited it os it's only a short story, and in that editing a picked up on most of my grammar mistakes, but thanks for reviewing anyway.

short stroy i wrote when i had writers block Ring,Ring, death is here. The crackling rain thundered down upon the woman, drenching her black curls. She hurried down the street, ...

Amnesia Prologue Cold fear pain. These were all the feelings that rushed through my body as I crashed head first into the sea of daggers. The icy water filled my ...

Hey i thought this was great and very entertaining. Also the dialog was cool. but i didn't understand it, which was real shame as i haven't read the other parts ...

Hey i thought this was great and very entertaining. Also the dialog was cool. but i didn't understand it, which was real shame as i haven't read the other parts ...

Gate of Secrets Prologue “The world will end”. Said a large cloaked man, his voice quite but stern. He had the voice of a leader; this man was obviously of ...

This is a great idea and i dont agree with the others about it being overdone. i think werewolves in rome is a very cool and unique idea so thumbs ...

U.N.I.T 21 Chapter One The silver Mercedes pelted full speed through the night, dodging the busy traffic of London. Its silver body shined in the Moonlights gaze, and it wheels ...

I also thought the description you used was fab, and the plot was gripping. lol that's all i have got to say really so thumbs up. i want to hear ...

Hey I'm not much of a critic so ill just say it in few words. First of all i loved the language you used, and the effect of when her ...

when u said she was writting from the dead. shes not. She said to her husband to tell the boys what she is saying now.