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Re: Sp-lit
Sp-lit Chapter One The Warning I studied my surroundings yet there was nothing to study. It was weird, hard to explain. But one thing was for sure I was alone, ...
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Re: Trouble on putting ideas to paper
hi i have got a pretty original idea well thats what i think anyway. It's the best i can come up with. But i get ideas, but the problem is ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Dark Children
This is rough of my new idea novel prologue of' Dark Children' feed back appreciated. Dark Children Prologue Oh I’ll tell you a tale; oh I’ll tell you a tale. ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: Prologue Teaser of N.N
I wrote this for the fun of it, if it's any good I'll follow up on it if not, no worries. Oh I’ll tell you a tale; oh I’ll tell ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: New idea
Hye thanks alot for the great comments, i'm sticking to it but im changing title and making only six kids ages 13-16. At the begining i'm genna intoduce them and ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: New idea
hi I'm thinking about writing a book about superheroes. And i knew what your are all probably thinking.' unoriginal,boring,same old heroes versus villains, bla bla bla' so if your not ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Prowlers of the Night (Chapter two)
Chapter Two Daniel was sitting down on the grassy banks, huddled up with his group. Their short sleeve t-shirts swaying in the gentle summer breeze, picking at the green blades ...
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: Prowlers of the Night (Chapter One)
Chapter One The wolf howled up at the ghostly sphere, its dagger-sharp teeth glistening eerily. Its eyes were sky blue, and its ears pointed and upright. The wolf’s ears pricked ...
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: Opinion on new idea
Hey thanks for the advice, i'll see if it works in 3rd person. But do you reckon that it could work if i did both or would that be too ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: Opinion on new idea
hey i've got this new idea about this guy with amnesia and he dosn't no who he is, but i'm not sure if i should write in 1st person or ...
Feb 25, 2008 -
Re: Reborn
Hey thanks alot for reviewing, and i can actually see now that some off the stuff dosn't make sense. Oh and ill remmebr not just to do spell check. So ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Reborn
Reborn Prologue The sun dropped down, and the world was plunged in darkness. The New World was a world divided in two. For the first twelve hours of day it ...
Feb 20, 2008 - Re: The Quest for Flight: ch 4 part I Feb 20, 2008
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Re: The Quest for Flight: ch 4 part I
This was a good read, but i thoguth the description could have been way betetr, especially for describing the preavers. And it hgouht it was a little too rushed fro ...
Feb 20, 2008
