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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Sp-lit

    Sp-lit Chapter One The Warning I studied my surroundings yet there was nothing to study. It was weird, hard to explain. But one thing was for sure I was alone, ...

    Jun 17, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Trouble on putting ideas to paper

    hi i have got a pretty original idea well thats what i think anyway. It's the best i can come up with. But i get ideas, but the problem is ...

    Jun 17, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Dark Children

    This is rough of my new idea novel prologue of' Dark Children' feed back appreciated. Dark Children Prologue Oh I’ll tell you a tale; oh I’ll tell you a tale. ...

    Mar 19, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Prologue Teaser of N.N

    I wrote this for the fun of it, if it's any good I'll follow up on it if not, no worries. Oh I’ll tell you a tale; oh I’ll tell ...

    Mar 18, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: New idea

    Hye thanks alot for the great comments, i'm sticking to it but im changing title and making only six kids ages 13-16. At the begining i'm genna intoduce them and ...

    Mar 11, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: New idea

    hi I'm thinking about writing a book about superheroes. And i knew what your are all probably thinking.' unoriginal,boring,same old heroes versus villains, bla bla bla' so if your not ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prowlers of the Night (Chapter two)

    Chapter Two Daniel was sitting down on the grassy banks, huddled up with his group. Their short sleeve t-shirts swaying in the gentle summer breeze, picking at the green blades ...

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prowlers of the Night (Chapter One)

    Chapter One The wolf howled up at the ghostly sphere, its dagger-sharp teeth glistening eerily. Its eyes were sky blue, and its ears pointed and upright. The wolf’s ears pricked ...

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Opinion on new idea

    Hey thanks for the advice, i'll see if it works in 3rd person. But do you reckon that it could work if i did both or would that be too ...

    Feb 26, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Opinion on new idea

    hey i've got this new idea about this guy with amnesia and he dosn't no who he is, but i'm not sure if i should write in 1st person or ...

    Feb 25, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Reborn

    Hey thanks alot for reviewing, and i can actually see now that some off the stuff dosn't make sense. Oh and ill remmebr not just to do spell check. So ...

    Feb 22, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Reborn

    Reborn Prologue The sun dropped down, and the world was plunged in darkness. The New World was a world divided in two. For the first twelve hours of day it ...

    Feb 20, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Quest for Flight: ch 4 part I

    Feb 20, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Quest for Flight: ch 4 part I

    Feb 20, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Quest for Flight: ch 4 part I

    This was a good read, but i thoguth the description could have been way betetr, especially for describing the preavers. And it hgouht it was a little too rushed fro ...

    Feb 20, 2008


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