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  • Art & Photography Re: Get Higher

    The color is nice, but it's a bit bright and overexposed. Also, while the trunk is sharp, all those leaves in the foreground are really blurry. I think it would ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Piggie Tea Party

    Peanut! I'm not an artist by any means, but I'll try to help. The hand looked a childish (not childishly drawn; just as if it were the hand of a ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Just some of my pictures.

    Hello! I love photography and evidently you have a talent for it. Of course, there's always room for improvement, so I do have a few things to say. 1) This ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Major feedback needed.

    Hi! So I think the angle and placement in this is wonderful. However, the ornament is too close in the foreground for it to be so blurry, which made my ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My first edit of a photo

    Hi! Here as requested. =] So I really like the colors in this. It looks like a painting. The green makes it look eerie, and I love the contrast. However, ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Black and white paintings

    Hi there! 1 ~ Very realistic eyes and hair. The lines around his mouth make him look a little weird. His nose is a little off too. I like the ...

    Nov 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Snakes and Ladders

    So this is really cool. Normally I prefer simpler shots, but here, I think the chaos of the background actually works really well. I love the colors and it's focused ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Illuminated Celtic Letter "E"-rough

    Oooh. This is pretty. I like the detail you added. The dog (is it a dog?) at the bottom of the E looks kind of cartoon-ish. I don't know if ...

    Oct 16, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Some More Doodles

    Hi there! You get my first review review in over 2 months, so I apologize in advance if I'm not much help. I like her hair and her face. The ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sunset from the Plane

    Oh wow, Crocksy. This is amazing. Great colors, great lighting, nice angle. You followed the rule of thirds pretty well, too. It's a little smudgy-looking, but that happens sometimes when ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Busy Jack Frost

    These are gorgeous. What kind of camera do you use? 1) Excellent light. You could crop off some of the ground at the bottom though; it's just empty space distracts ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Blue Cat's Eyes

    This is really cool. You should consider entering it into Lilymoore's visual poetry contest ( ). And I actually just looked up and saw that Lily said the same thing. ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Warmth and the Summertime / Still Wandering

    Holly! As always, your artwork is beautiful. I love the gray tones in Still Wandering. The shading in the clouds and her hair are lovely. The only little nitpick I ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: With Arms Around the Engine (My Biggest Project So Far)

    Oh. Wow. This is incredibly detailed, and the time and effort you put into it is apparent. I definitely would not have the patience to draw something like this. I ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Blue, Red, and Green (Colours Contest entry)

    Lily! I haven't seen you in a while. The first one hurts my eyes because it's blurry and unfocused. But the bright colors and the contrast between the red and ...

    Jun 5, 2010


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