Explosive_Pen

Far far away, there is a land where people are more metal-based than carbon-based. This is, of course, a good thing since metal is nice and solid, while carbon can ...

Hi there. I agree with Galerius; there is too much importance placed on the rhyme scheme than on the actual coherence of the poem. The rhyme breaks the flow and ...

Hi there! This is definitely too small, but since I don't know how to fix that, we'll just have to work with what we've got. I agree with Eli; the ...

Hi Clo! I first read this a while ago, actually, but didn't feel as if I could give you a good review on it. But I noticed it in the ...

Peanut, I loved Wintergirls. ^^

Down by a river with a medieval name Like Past Regrets or Doom, I stare at the reflection of My same hollow eyes and queasy smile And mud-brown angry brokenness. ...

So... I've never written in third-person before, so I think I need some help with the point of view stuff? Thanks. ^^ Prologue The canyons sing to Sage. Down near ...

Hi Snoink! I read it all the way through, and I loved it. I'm not a big sci-fi fan, but I do find myself wanting to read more. I like ...

Hi there! So, I like this. You did a really good job with the shading, especially on the cheek and around his eyes. Your lines are also done well; not ...

Mimi! I like this. Your handwriting is beautiful and I like this song anyway. ^^ I agree with Kat; your angle is great. I like how it focuses in on ...

Twin! So my review on this will probably suck, but I know you asked me a while ago... And since you reviewed mah poem and all I guess I'm indebted. ...

I worshipped the golden days of autumn When cinnamon spice speckled the trees And the sky crumbled into itself. The smell of pumpkins thickened the air – Like a jaundice-colored ...

Kamasss.

Hi Kamas. ^^ It's been a while since I've brought myself to review something, so excuse me if I'm not much help. This was a pretty great poem, Kammy-chan. Just ...

Hehe, I'm not on here. :D