Explosive_Pen

Aww, thanks! That just makes me feel so wonderfully special. It's always good to hear that someone likes my writing.

[quote=clueless]Small as a drop of rain. Rain, sparkling below[/quote] The repetition of rain is a bit, er tacky? For lack of a better word.... But I like the whole bird's ...

Wow. 'Twas really nice, and sweet. But it's all "I, I, I" or "You, You, You." It sounds a little selfish, what with the I want's and all. But, if ...

I liked it, though it's a bit vague. I don't really understand what is happening until about the third stanza. After that, however, it cleared up. Overall, nice job.

Wow. I really liked it, and it's so true. I loved the last lines, "I am your friend, You are my anamoly." Oh, how I can relate. Deeply touched. Amazing ...

HAH! Loved it. I admit, I am a Twilight fan, but I'm not overly-obsessed like some people are. I find it disgusting how some people just drool all over it. ...

Hah, it made me laugh. It's so true, though. There as those who can write, and those who just... can't. And clearly, you can! Nice work; keep it up!

Prologue The wind in the trees blew hard as the entire forest was shaken by the storm. The rain came pounding down upon my head, leaving my black hair sodden ...

I liked it, though I must agree that it is a bit gross. The line (or part of a line, at least), "My desperate darling," is a bit odd. You ...

"Why don't help me comprehend these changes in mood?" This sentence, to me, doesn't make sense. It lacks a subject, so I don't know who you're asking this of. But, ...

Uh, hi everyone. So I'm new, yeah. Just figured I'd say hey. :D