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Re: The Knight's Secret (1 of 2)
Hi Rosey! Nitpicks first. I only noticed two small spelling mistakes: No mater how much I used this spell, it still drained me. Matter My master came up to me ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Painting
Hi there! So. This is beautiful. Personally, I'm a bit of a failure with paint, which is part of the reason why I appreciate this so much. I love the ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
#10 Daddy, we are too much the same, Too close for comfort To be comfortable with scratchy Paper-cut edges. And though we’re made Of the same stuff, I find I ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: As I'm Living- Jas's PoMo thread
Poem VI speaks to me. It reminds me of summer days spent with my daddy on his best friend's boat, watching the blood trickle down when they pulled the fish ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
#9 He called. And that's the rainbow, The sunshine-vibration Buried in her pants' pocket. "Honey, honey, Tell me everything, Because I love, care, Want to be with you, And I ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
#7 Once upon a time, In a land without a name… I sat in your throne – A girl without a face, Listening for your footsteps Pounding down the hall. ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
Thank you both Navita and Kylan for your feedback. ^^ I'll make sure to take your suggestions to heart when I edit these poems in May.
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
Spring in the ghost town inside my run-down mind Is hardly perpetual. Greyscale phantoms flit in corners Like disintegrating newspapers left to burn In the funeral pyres of forget-me-nots That ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Spring In Kentucky
Hi there! Your pictures were pretty. I especially liked the first one; cute ducks. :) However, I have two suggestions to make. First, next time you take pictures, try to ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
#5 A cross-legged conundrum In front of the television screen, He looks better with blue halos - Waxy crayon stripes in his hair. In front of the television screen He ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
#2 Alone. A place where Memories go to die And light fades Down my fingertips. Silver incandescence Paints my lamenting Serendipity. Where I go to sleep Is where sunsets Kiss ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
#1 Gardens are a special secret place Where the spiritual is separate From the wagging-fingered preaching. Frog friars croak hymns and read From the gospel of survival. I hear the ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Once upon a time, in a far away land, and I mean like, so far out there that you need a freaking map to find it, there lived a pretty ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Pen's NaPo Thread
Sooo I'm apparently trying it this year? This should be fun. ^^
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
Oxygen is what I need To live and bond With carbon-based diamonds With the number twelve for normal And fourteen for glowing green. A big red O on the periodic ...
Mar 30, 2010
