Explosive_Pen

Colors of Me I wake silver in the morning light shining like the moon. Turning yellow on a sunny day warming with the sky. Gray standing in the shadows In ...

Almost complete improvisation. I tend to somehow get lost with an outline. It just makes me feel so restricted.

Wow. I truly loved this. It's so sweet and beautiful. I'm guessing since you wrote this about God, you experienced some sort of epiphany of religiousness or something like that? ...

Beautiful poem. Absolutely beautiful. Whatever did happen to those coke bottles? The cans are too hard to open and hurt my hands. I thought it was a teensy bit choppy, ...

Trapped in these four walls, Not knowing where to turn, There is nothing left for me, But to silently scream. Glass is easily broken, And permafrost never melts. I am ...

Nice poem! I liked the steady rhythm of it and how it really didn't seem like you had thought to much about it; like it just poured out of you. ...

Wow, glad you all think so highly of me and my poetry. Thanks for the praise and critiques and whatnot. :D

Indeed. Cheers. :D

Thanks for the critiques! I don't know why I keep doing that with the too/to. I guess I just like O's? And I was actually planning on rewriting TEW (the ...

Bah, 'tis Robert Patinson!

Chapter Four: At times it seems as if life has reached a point where all you can do is sit and let your thoughts wander. It is during this moment ...

Hello! I liked the message your poem was trying to portray. The pain we all feel inside but hate to acknowledge. However, I thought that the flow of it was ...

Thanks! I think the shalls work with the formal attitude of the poem. And yeah, it probably should be in narrative poetry... Oh well, it's too late to change that ...

I have a few issues with it: "Badgering encouragement" How can encouragement be badgering? Unless it's too much encouragement.... I guess I just have issues with that line. "The place ...

Very very very good. I did notice a few grammar mistakes (like, one or two), but I lost track of them while reading, and I'm too lazy to go back ...