Explosive_Pen

Interesting. I think the real problem here is that there's no rhythm (I have rhythm issues too, though, so I won't penalize you for that too much). You poem looks ...

I had issues with your punctuation. Go back and add commas, periods, and semicolons where necessary. I loved your rhyme scheme. It was subtle, so it wasn't the dominant focus ...

Alright, so the title's definitely gonna be Pyromaniac; so look out for me in the forums (I'm thinking either Fantasy or Other?

Okay, I think I have a plot, though I'll have to spend some more time browsing NaNo till I'm sure. So combine the whole X-men mutant super power deal with ...

Character development makes for a great story. Get to know your characters. Give them quirks, give them mannerisms, habits, obsessions. Make them interesting. Make them funny or deep. Make them ...

I need an idea for a book. My current novel is going well, but I'm putting it on hold till I get all the hand-written stuff typed. I started a ...

Thank you! Yep, I'll play around with the rhythm (I never was good at that). And it's "just in case". :D

:D Yes, and it's ridiculously cold.

I'm not afraid of death, And I'm not afraid to live Like tomorrow's never coming. And I have so much to give. Eyebrows knit together, And biting my fingernails. I'm ...

Ding ding ding, we have a winner! *hands Demeter a trophy*

Ummm, that's not on the coast.

Teehee, nope. East coast? North?

Nope, not Minnesota. (Hint: 'tis an N state)

Hi!!! *Jumps up and down waving like some sort of psychotic freak* 'Tis moi, Explosive_Pen. I live in the states (guess which one!), I'm Polish (and I speak it!), and ...

"You took something of mine And I never want it back It’s forever changed And mangled In your hand" I love this. Amazing. :D Your poem was beautiful. The only ...