Explosive_Pen

Alrighty, nitpicks! Let's see what we can do here, huh? Black Water I tangle myself in the net of life while trying not to drown in its waters. Good metaphor! ...

I decided instead of poetry, I should write out my feelings in story-format. This might work better for me, so here goes (feel free to tear it apart): I looked ...

Oh my God. I am so sorry that this happened to you; and yes, I know that sorry can't heal the scars, but it feels like the right thing to ...

Hi!!!! Okay, the rules have been covered, so no wasting time on that. It's good that you're a "Master of Names" and "World Cartographer of Anything" because I suck and ...

Alrighty, so I decided I should save this poem, and here's the result: I'm not afraid of death, And I'm not afraid to live Like tomorrow's never coming. And I ...

First poetry post in ages

Your poem actually made me squirm. I was so uncomfortable with it. I've experianced bulemic feelings as well, with the whole I-feel-fat-I'm-gonna-go-stuff-myself, but I've never quite been able to mak

Oh, this is great. Fantastic. Guys like Xander are horrid, and if I were you, I'd have smacked him silly. Jake sounds like a really good friend. I like him ...

Woah, really long poem! Let's see what we can do with this, shall we? Pulling Apart My Sanity ~ I’m going to scream as loud as I can...But you won’t ...

Hi there! I've never tried to critique artwork before, and since I'm no artist, I doubt I'd be very good at it. But I'll try my best, and I hope ...

Call me "ugly" one more time. Come on. I dare you. I'd rather be hideous than be vain, Callous and self-absorbed; Choking on make-up and brand names. My face is ...

Feminition ~ xD Yeah, I'm starting to get embarrassed about it now, hah. First chapters usually are all la-di-da-this-is-the-main-character-and-yeah-here's-the-deal-so-read-and-try-not-to-vomit-please

“Whoa!” I shouted, my voice echoing throughout the vast room, ricocheting off the walls and the high ceilings. “This place is huge.” “Lucky we won the lotto, huh?” my twin ...

I think he should only be blind in one eye. That would hinder his vision, but not so much that it's a MAJOR disability. Play around with it and tell ...

Chichi ~ I have played a string instrument, but I quit about two years ago because it was getting in the way of my school work. Viola. It makes the ...