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Re: Tarantella
For me, I think it was The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe. I absolutely adore it and the rhythm is genius. God, I wish I could write as rhythmically as ...
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Re: A Basic Introduction to Poetry
Poetry is a journey. The more you write it, the more it improves. The more you love it, the more trips you'll take. It's that simple, and it's that complicated. ...
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Re: What Is Lyric Poetry?
Hey June! Thanks for the explanation. It always pisses my English teacher off when I get lyric and narrative confused. She tells me, "Eliza, for someone who can write like ...
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Re: morgan/chevy
I love these pictures! Your use of color and angles and lights is just so beautiful. I especially like the last one. What book is that? Hah; I love the ...
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Re: Trimming the idea hedge
Well, I don't typically have this problem since my ideas aren't very... idealistic? That makes no sense, but what I'm trying to say is that I actually have problems coming ...
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Re: help with a character
Your welcome! I like Rosey's idea, about being color blind. That'd be fun to experiment with. Like he thinks the sky's bright fuschia. xD
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: OMFG, it's a pen that's exploding!
Yes it is! I love New York, but I haven't been in the city in forever. I'm a small-town girl. xD
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Honestly Ugly
Alrighty! I think I've got enough advice to do a rewrite so, here goes. Choking on make-up and brand names, She mouths "ugly" with a whispered breath. But I'd rather ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Poem
Hi June! I loved the message of this poem; like it tells you what the important things in life are and whatnot. But you tell this instead of showing it. ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Stars
Oh, this is one of those diamond poems! You don't see too many of these anymore. Points for creativity! I really liked this poem because it perfectly described a star, ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Tissue For Your Tears?
This is for Princess's and Demeter's old-fashioned poetry contest. It has to be about a random object so I'm gonna choose *cue dramatic horror movie music* a tissue. I caress ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Welcome
Oh, this poem is so cute! From the point of view of a welcome mat that you put at the door, right? I love it. Let's see if I can ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Redemption - Prologue/Chapter 1
" “I don’t know.” She looked up at her owner with swollen eyes still healing from its last defeat in battle. They told a tale of fear and terror. They ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: New Years Pictures
Hi! I don't know anything about photography, but I loved these pictures. They were all really pretty and artistic, in their own sort of way. I feel that the tree ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Writing is Pain
Okay, so there's issues on the word "writ". It's an archaic word meaning a piece of writing, sort of like a text, but it's also a past participle of write, ...
Jan 1, 2009
