Explosive_Pen

Completely wrong! Wronger than you were before, even. Um, so, red hair with blue eyes?

Night Mistress ~ Nope, but I do have a brother. Guess again! And I'm guessing your very tall with dark blondish/light brownish hair and brown eyes and a light tan.

Then throw it out. ~ To my mother about food that I most definitely was not going to eat.

My muse frequently takes vacations and only gives me a few hours of writing time to work with. I wish I could abuse it!

Um, the person above me doesn't have an avatar (or if you do, I can't see it; sorry!) so I'm guessing..... Super-pale with freckles, black hair, and green eyes and ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. So my critiques will be in bold, 'kay? Sometimes I wish I could just melt away. Burning water doesn't help. Yet here I am, with thoughsands ...

Not bad at all. I wish I could come up with titles fast. I usually come up with the title halfway through the piece.

Haha! I loved this! I'm literally loling. Stephenie Meyer ruined your script. This is hilarious.

Oh, is this a fanfic of the Warriors series? Gosh, I haven't read those books in forever. "He tried to word" I think you meant the word, right? This was ...

I loved your rhythm. God, I wish my poetry had rhythm like that. I suck at rhythm. I agree with nixonblitzen that nothing really changed in your poem, and it ...

The repetition of "Dear you" actually works in this poem. Congrats on pulling it off! Like tennisprincess said, some lines were a lot stronger than the others, so maybe figure ...

I love The Writer. It's amazing. Also, Writer's Yearbook is good. I haven't gotten Writer's Digest, but I might, if it's any good.

Thanks, Rosey! I'll work on it.

Oh my God, this is so creepy. Eliza's my name! So I got a little freaked when I read the first paragraph, hah. And oh my good golly gosh, I ...

Awesome! Your from Indonesia? That's so cool! I'm from good ol' USA and I've only been out of the country 3 times (Aruba, Poland, Canada, in that order; Aruba at ...