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Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI
Oh. My. God. This is win. I am literally disolved into a puddle of giggles on the floor. When I read the title, I was like, "Yeah, this should be ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: The Thorn on the Rose
Unwind my fingers From around your wrists. Push my face away, And tell me it's for the best. Tell me you don't deserve me. Tell me my skin smells like ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Diary of a Seventh grade Girl
Oh my God. Such horrid grammar. I feel a compulsive need to capitalize all those i's, add commas and semicoloms and, well, other Punctuation Beasts. And yeah, it's not the ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: What's your Favorite Poem(s)?
I agree with Angel of Death; Highway Man is amazing. The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe is my favorite. Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary, ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: I hate the way...
*Ahem* Repetition is... not good. Try something like: "I hate the way that your eyes shine, And look right through me to read my mind. And the smell of your ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: A Memoir
I have many owners— Most are young, few are old, And the scary thing is: They all have the same goal They push me around, And cause me great stress ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Take Me Back To 90's
Ah, the 90s. Bill Clinton was President, no Georgey the Bush, no stupid, pointless wars... Ah, those were the days. Pokemon, being pre-five-years-old. My God, those were such simpler times. ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Pictures 3
I love these pictures! They're beautfiful. I like the one of the leaf, with the cat in the background. but I didn't see the dragonfly... Anyways, your sketches are fine, ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: How do i create a poem?
Poetry isn't really something that you can learn. It just... happens. And you get better. My advice? Read real poetry. None of that "roses are red" crud. REAL poetry. Like ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Stains
"The murderer leaves the room, the door swings close softly, and their victim gasps, gulping up their last, precious breaths. There is no drop of blood on the sheets or ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Oh, yay! That took long enough.
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Let me go
Hi Rosey! I’ve spread my wings, I’m ready to fly, Why must you stop me one more time, I think a semicolon would work better here. To say goodbye? Do ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
But I already said every eye color! Unless you wear contacts. And bingo!
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Nope. Hazel for you?
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Right about the glasses and a little lighter on the hair. Wrong with the eyes. So green eyes?
Jan 5, 2009
