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Explosive_Pen

  • Scripts Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI

    Oh. My. God. This is win. I am literally disolved into a puddle of giggles on the floor. When I read the title, I was like, "Yeah, this should be ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Thorn on the Rose

    Unwind my fingers From around your wrists. Push my face away, And tell me it's for the best. Tell me you don't deserve me. Tell me my skin smells like ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Diary of a Seventh grade Girl

    Oh my God. Such horrid grammar. I feel a compulsive need to capitalize all those i's, add commas and semicoloms and, well, other Punctuation Beasts. And yeah, it's not the ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: What's your Favorite Poem(s)?

    I agree with Angel of Death; Highway Man is amazing. The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe is my favorite. Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary, ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I hate the way...

    *Ahem* Repetition is... not good. Try something like: "I hate the way that your eyes shine, And look right through me to read my mind. And the smell of your ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Memoir

    I have many owners— Most are young, few are old, And the scary thing is: They all have the same goal They push me around, And cause me great stress ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Take Me Back To 90's

    Ah, the 90s. Bill Clinton was President, no Georgey the Bush, no stupid, pointless wars... Ah, those were the days. Pokemon, being pre-five-years-old. My God, those were such simpler times. ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Pictures 3

    I love these pictures! They're beautfiful. I like the one of the leaf, with the cat in the background. but I didn't see the dragonfly... Anyways, your sketches are fine, ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: How do i create a poem?

    Poetry isn't really something that you can learn. It just... happens. And you get better. My advice? Read real poetry. None of that "roses are red" crud. REAL poetry. Like ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Stains

    "The murderer leaves the room, the door swings close softly, and their victim gasps, gulping up their last, precious breaths. There is no drop of blood on the sheets or ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar

    Oh, yay! That took long enough.

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Let me go

    Hi Rosey! I’ve spread my wings, I’m ready to fly, Why must you stop me one more time, I think a semicolon would work better here. To say goodbye? Do ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar

    But I already said every eye color! Unless you wear contacts. And bingo!

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar

    Nope. Hazel for you?

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar

    Right about the glasses and a little lighter on the hair. Wrong with the eyes. So green eyes?

    Jan 5, 2009


Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist.
— Pablo Picasso