Explosive_Pen

Thorn

Cute. It's a bit too short to really say much about, but there wasn't much rhythm. And I'm guessing you already know this, but it was a bit cliched. Work ...

Pulse

Heart

8/10 Cute.

Toes

Limbs

Paper

Cramps

Haha! I love how you over-exaggerate the characters' personalities. It proves how totally cliched Twilight is and how the characters are so, well... dumb? Well, not dumb, but... you know. ...

Tummy

Dude, my dad's watching that on the news right now. Just so glad no one was hurt.

Thanks for the tips, everyone. I actually started writing a short story in the past half hour. :D

Rosey ~ Thanks for the tip. I'm not so into historical fiction, but I guess I could steal some stuff (like the Great Depression; that'd be interesting). I guess the ...

9/10 Paramore owns.