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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Instruction Guide to the Crazy

    Hi there. This was cute. ^^ I enjoyed it. Never rhyme rhyme with time, Because it's cliché, Well, that's what I say, And neva rite wit korekt gramer or punctuation, ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Counting Crows

    Inspired of course, by the wonderful band. Particularly a stanza in this song: I haven't written poetry in forever so I need serious help. Thanks. The crows on the wire ...

    Sep 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Some More Doodles

    Hi there! You get my first review review in over 2 months, so I apologize in advance if I'm not much help. I like her hair and her face. The ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Renaissance Man

    So I'm aware that after such a long absence, I have absolutely no right to post anything. but this is my first idea in months, and so naturally I couldn't ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sunset from the Plane

    Oh wow, Crocksy. This is amazing. Great colors, great lighting, nice angle. You followed the rule of thirds pretty well, too. It's a little smudgy-looking, but that happens sometimes when ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Busy Jack Frost

    These are gorgeous. What kind of camera do you use? 1) Excellent light. You could crop off some of the ground at the bottom though; it's just empty space distracts ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Blue Cat's Eyes

    This is really cool. You should consider entering it into Lilymoore's visual poetry contest ( ). And I actually just looked up and saw that Lily said the same thing. ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Warmth and the Summertime / Still Wandering

    Holly! As always, your artwork is beautiful. I love the gray tones in Still Wandering. The shading in the clouds and her hair are lovely. The only little nitpick I ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: With Arms Around the Engine (My Biggest Project So Far)

    Oh. Wow. This is incredibly detailed, and the time and effort you put into it is apparent. I definitely would not have the patience to draw something like this. I ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: All of Us.

    Hi StreetRat. Your poem was well-written and well-structured. A little too cynical for my taste, but good regardless. It's true, it's honest, and it's thoughtful. Not many poets achieve that, ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Blue, Red, and Green (Colours Contest entry)

    Lily! I haven't seen you in a while. The first one hurts my eyes because it's blurry and unfocused. But the bright colors and the contrast between the red and ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Even In Death I Still Love You

    Hi there. I like that the heart stands out from the gray background. It makes the shot a lot more interesting. The actual photo is a bit fuzzy and grainy. ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Beach mixed media

    Hey there! Ooh, I like this. I like how the testures work together to give it a more interesting, three-dimensional look. The little flowers are lovely. The one thing I ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Chevrolet

    Thanks for the reviews, everyone. ^^ And YES, I always get waste/waist confused. It was meant to be waist. Thanks.

    May 5, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Chevrolet

    The past is a glove compartment In a run-down Chevrolet – A place to bury broken trinkets And take the occasional peek At what we thought was treasure. I’ll drive ...

    May 2, 2010


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