Explosive_Pen

Punctuation was horrid. Add commas much? Anyway, the rhythm was good, except for in the third stanza; the last line was too short. I like the message of this poem, ...

Cinnamon

Tree

Wrap

I'd do the only reasonable thing: scream like a banshee and run around in circles and assume that I'm getting very very old and very very senile. What would you ...

Plant

Oh my God. This was absolutely beautiful. Well-written and great raw emotion. Wonderful opening line; it really was a great hook. And the last lines were absolutely brilliant. The firs5t ...

"Really, now." ~ Sarcastic comment to my mother.

Tomorrow doesn't matter 'cause we are caught in endless time. Lies that we tried to scatter don't worth more than a dime. Don't should be aren't. We can only dream ...

(('Nother of my odd little experiments. Tell me what you think.)) The snow came, blanketing the earth in sparkling white crystals. The bare trees reached to the sky, their branches ...

10/10! House is awesome!

Pretty! Just downsize it. It's huge, therefore it's hard to see, therefore it's hard to critique. I like the simplicity of the photograph, though. It's just a rose, but a ...

Money

Sneak

Creep