Explosive_Pen

I always did suck at titles, hehe. So I'm a bit late, if you'll excuse me. I did write a poem yesterday, and I suppose I'll write today's now. But ...

Hi! So I think the angle and placement in this is wonderful. However, the ornament is too close in the foreground for it to be so blurry, which made my ...

Hello Meep! Let me start by saying that I thought this was absolutely adorable. It accurately describes the way a young person - especially a boy, I feel - loves ...

Thank you all so much. And hehe, Jabbsies ^^ I showed it to him and he got that "Oh em gee" look on his face and said he loved it. ...

I find that words don’t seem to fit In the gaps between our fingers and Underneath my wasted spaces like The crinkles around my eyes and mouth – And here ...

Hi! Here as requested. =] So I really like the colors in this. It looks like a painting. The green makes it look eerie, and I love the contrast. However, ...

Hi there! 1 ~ Very realistic eyes and hair. The lines around his mouth make him look a little weird. His nose is a little off too. I like the ...

Darling, take my hand in yours, Lace up your shoes, lace up our fingers, And let’s dissolve into the starlight. Let’s intertwine on the tips of words That never did ...

So this is really cool. Normally I prefer simpler shots, but here, I think the chaos of the background actually works really well. I love the colors and it's focused ...

This isn't exactly a poem. Stringing words together With breaks in between Does not make for a poem. A poem must have rhythm, structure, creative language. Similes, metaphores, imagery. All ...

Hi there! So I was attracted to your title because I'm Polish. =] Just because I might not write every word write. The second write should be right. I was ...

Yes, three parts. You can review one, you can review them all, but I would like some help. I. Metal lips on my skin, Lipstick red pouring out, Oh why ...

So the others already touched upon the spelling/grammar errors, so I won't bother to reiterate that. Your poem had nice flow and rhythm, and you actually stayed consistant to your ...

This is actually pretty good. If you hadn't said that you don't write poetry, I would have never guessed. I didn't find anything wrong with your word choice or grammar. ...

Oooh. This is pretty. I like the detail you added. The dog (is it a dog?) at the bottom of the E looks kind of cartoon-ish. I don't know if ...