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  • Randomosity Archive Re: The User Below You...

    Does it count if it's by one day? The person below me does not enjoy typing out the words: the person below me.

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Butterflies Dance No More

    Hiya Evi! Wonderful poem. Some rhythm issues, though. And I don't particularly understand your transition from the second to the third stanza. The grass was bowing before you, but now ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: What inspires/inspired you?

    Anywhere and everywhere that is interesting.

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: You Didn't Get To Heaven But You Made It Close

    Hi! I loved the idea. It's so unique. I agree about the whole perfection thing. Make him interesting. Give him flaws. And you spelled amber wrong. Just one more thing: ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Undiscovered

    Hmm... An elf... That might be from TEW? Or am I being an ego-maniac, assuming Lunette might have been built from Callista's bones? And am I getting metaphor crazy now? ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Skyfall

    Hi! I'm a review this now, 'kay? This was so beautifully written. And I'm listening to Blue October (a band that most people I ask have not heard of), and ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: The User Below You...

    Haha. How did you know? The person below me has a completely unreasonable fear of libraries. And hats. And hobos. And spiders. And various other assorted things.

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Can't even spare a piece of my mind

    Hello! I'd be willing to review this for you, if I had a little more time. Could you possibly wait about a week for me to review this? Winter break ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Abortion

    Aww... So sad. I've always been pro-life, so this really made me cry. This is so beautifully written. There's so much raw emotion, and you really feel like you're the ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Describe that word!

    Pale

    Feb 3, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Let's work toward infinity.

    Hi! I know almost nothing about art, but I'll do my best. I don't particularly like some of the lines here. They make your hands look a bit... meaty, I ...

    Feb 3, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Win

    Feb 3, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Wanton

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lonely

    TWIN!!!!! This is so sad... You've been lieing to me! No, but seriously, I know exactly how you feel. Alright, so nit-pickles: Alone in the room, The should be this. ...

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Their souls took flight

    Um, first of all: chatspeak alert! Oh noez! That's one of the most annoying things ever, particularly because I can't understand one word of it. I know, I'm such a ...

    Feb 2, 2009


I would always rather be happy than dignified.
— Charlotte Brontë, Jane Eyre