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Re: The User Below You...
Does it count if it's by one day? The person below me does not enjoy typing out the words: the person below me.
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: The Butterflies Dance No More
Hiya Evi! Wonderful poem. Some rhythm issues, though. And I don't particularly understand your transition from the second to the third stanza. The grass was bowing before you, but now ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: What inspires/inspired you?
Anywhere and everywhere that is interesting.
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: You Didn't Get To Heaven But You Made It Close
Hi! I loved the idea. It's so unique. I agree about the whole perfection thing. Make him interesting. Give him flaws. And you spelled amber wrong. Just one more thing: ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Undiscovered
Hmm... An elf... That might be from TEW? Or am I being an ego-maniac, assuming Lunette might have been built from Callista's bones? And am I getting metaphor crazy now? ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Skyfall
Hi! I'm a review this now, 'kay? This was so beautifully written. And I'm listening to Blue October (a band that most people I ask have not heard of), and ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You...
Haha. How did you know? The person below me has a completely unreasonable fear of libraries. And hats. And hobos. And spiders. And various other assorted things.
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Can't even spare a piece of my mind
Hello! I'd be willing to review this for you, if I had a little more time. Could you possibly wait about a week for me to review this? Winter break ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Abortion
Aww... So sad. I've always been pro-life, so this really made me cry. This is so beautifully written. There's so much raw emotion, and you really feel like you're the ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Describe that word!
Pale
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Let's work toward infinity.
Hi! I know almost nothing about art, but I'll do my best. I don't particularly like some of the lines here. They make your hands look a bit... meaty, I ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Win
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Wanton
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Lonely
TWIN!!!!! This is so sad... You've been lieing to me! No, but seriously, I know exactly how you feel. Alright, so nit-pickles: Alone in the room, The should be this. ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Their souls took flight
Um, first of all: chatspeak alert! Oh noez! That's one of the most annoying things ever, particularly because I can't understand one word of it. I know, I'm such a ...
Feb 2, 2009
