Explosive_Pen

Dark

Frisbee!

Hello! I shall review your poem. Rhythm ~ Absolutely amazing. Flawless. The flow was so smooth. Usually when reading poetry, my mind stutters trying to find the rhythm, but here, ...

Fallen angel

GASP! Dante's on my list. I need to get to the bookstore. Anyways: Devil

Speachless

Right

This was a really nice poem. The rhythm was a bit off, but I'll excuse that (hey, it's my fatal flaw too!). The story is interesting; I'd never really thought ...

I am afraid of: ~hats ~hobos ~spiders ~creepy dolls/clowns ~never being loved ~small, dark spaces ~heights ~gym class ~too much attention ~my world history teacher ~rejection ~pain ~demons ~alcoholics

Truffle

Mold

Disgusting

Wow! This is one of the only short poems that I actually liked. The problem with short poems is that you don't get the same amount of meaning and depth ...

Muck

Alrighty, nitpicks: I don't know what to do. All I can think about is you. Over there you used to stand. Holding my hand as tightly as you can. I ...