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Re: Cafe à la Review
Hey Kamas! =D I'd be honored to have you review this:
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Better
You complete me when you destroy me, When I tear myself apart To exterminate the person You wouldn’t want me to be. Your smile makes me squirm Makes me ache ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: On Rowboats and Trees
Hello. So I really enjoyed this. The imagery and tone of this poem are superb. You have a talent for combining words in ways that portray strong emotions. For example: ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Wake up
Hello! I really like the imagery and the strong words that you used in your poem, like "dragged" and "turmoil". Your words were interesting and created a strong feeling throughout ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Freckles
Lileh! Please forgive, I'm so rusty with both poetry and reviewing, but I'll do my very best. I’ve been trying all night to kiss away your freckles D'aww! with every ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: I wander here
Hey! You get my first review since January, so please bear with me if it isn't too good. I don't like the intro part. A good poem should stand on ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Battle Scars
Considering that I don't write much lately, I'm thoroughly out of practice. Tear it apart, I need some serious help. ;) My fingers search the space between us For the ...
May 31, 2011 -
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April 19th ~ My calf muscles strain against my papery skin, Threatening to break through the fragile elastic. If I run faster, maybe I’ll be able to fly and finally, ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
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April 18th (I'm so sorry these last few poems have been so terrible. I've been having a bad couple of days, so not exactly in the mood to write =/ ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
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April 15th (I did not want to, nor did I have the time to, write a legitimate poem that day. So yay for haikus.)~ I really do not Want to ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
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April 14th ~ He smells like piss and bananas, I think, and I have to wonder if The UN had thought of that, Of the rats he has to sleep ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
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April 13th ~ Daddy, I’m so sorry that I’m far too much like you. We consume to the things we think we want, And boil in white-hot rage when they ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
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April 10th ~ I feel naked when you touch me, Undress me with your halo eyes. Forgive me if I run and leave you With a handful of muddy scales ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
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April 9th (this is reallyreally bad -.-) ~ I want to shoot the weatherman For stealing my sunny days, For promising rain and thunder And letting the temperature drop. It ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
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April 8th (I know I'm in good hands =] )~ Our hands tell stories to each other When they slip casually together, A movement as familiar as dreaming. Your hand ...
Apr 8, 2011