Explosive_Pen

Oh my lord, so beautiful!!! I'm jealous! I'm just beginning to embark on my journey with photography, so there's not much advice I can give you, other than to focus ...

Hey there. Welcome to YWS. I'm a nitpick this, so comments are in bold, 'kay? I was thirteen when I got my first Micheal Kors watch. Fourteen when I got ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm a critique this for you, 'kay? Standing on foreign ground Too distant to recieve your warming rays. The ice on my barren surface Wraps ...

Oh. My. God. Meep, you are amazing. I mean, mutilating Bella is just about the best thing in the world, now, isn't it? And poking fun at Edward isn't too ...

This is for Rosey's Elements of Nature contest. I should think that the rain counts as one? I watched as the rain blurred the image outside the window, distorting the ...

Haha. Well, he was always ugly! I mean, in Twilight he looked stoned half the time!

So I have to write a five paragraph essay on The Pearl by John Steinbeck, analyzing the quote from chapter five where Kino says, "I do not want to bring ...

Get to know your characters. Become bests friends or worst enemies with them, but know everything about them. Know their favorite colors, their favorite cereals, their mannerisms, their birthdays, the

I am always amazed when I read your poems. You have such a great sense of rhythm and rhyme. I didn't spot any mistakes, and I've no critiques, because how ...

God Twin, you actually critiqued that? Really? I can't. It only matters if there's no meaning and really, the meaning's there, it's everywhere. And really Em? I may not know ...

Hell

Hmm.... Incomprehensible? But no, that ends in e, gah! Um.... Masochist? Oh wait, that doesn't fit the rules. *Sighs* I give up!

Simple, short, and sweet. No wasting words, no long, fancy descriptions. Just the simple truth in four lines. It takes talent to condense thoughts into something short and understandable. Which ...

Yes I am. The Edge of the World. I can't really work on it now, since my laptop doesn't have word and my mom's computer has a virus. So I ...

I learned simple words at age four. I was a slow developer. In the first grade, at age six, I was the only one in the class who couldn't read. ...